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 MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM! From behind his coffee cup...

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Female Number of posts : 146
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Age : Thirteen
Writing forte/s : Weird poetry and awful stories!
Registration date : 2006-08-11

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PostSubject: MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM! From behind his coffee cup...   MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM! From behind his coffee cup... EmptyThu Aug 17, 2006 3:18 pm

MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM!!!


Behind that coffe cup,
he keeps his secrets, secret
and hands me back my confidence
of delicate silver platters
I wish I could give him his,
I wish the world would sto]
just long enough for me
to hold him as we sleep.
The sky is turning yellow
(it's smoking marlboro lights) and I
seem to have no future
devoid of cow and gate.
But still he comforts and he knows
I love him dearly despite
it all and so he smiles
from behind his coffee cup.
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PostSubject: Re: MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM! From behind his coffee cup...   MY FIRST EVER HAPPY POEM! From behind his coffee cup... EmptyMon Sep 04, 2006 4:01 pm

ohh its so sweet!

you can just imagone his little grin :]

i like this its really good
spesh the way the first line is repeated at the end

stop is with a "p" though not a "]" lol

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