AngelWithTheScabbedWings
Mod in top hat
 Number of posts : 218
Age : 31
Location : Powell River B.C, Canada
Age : 14
Writing forte/s : Horror and Poems
Registration date : 2006-08-11
 | | Subject: Dreams Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:59 pm | |
| A poem for Cory
At night I sit in my cold dark room
Thinking and hoping I will dream of you,
You will hold me tight never let me go
Don’t go fast I want this night slow
I loved you for a long time this is true
Nothing on my mind, No one else but you
The dreams of you my mind misses
The dreams of your sweet passionate kisses
Over all this thought I know I love you
And Cory, Sweetie aint nothin you can do
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foaf.scribble
Mod in a tam 'o shanter
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Age : 32
Location : England :]
Age : 14
Registration date : 2006-08-11
| | Subject: Re: Dreams Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:08 am | |
| i love the rhythm in this poem
one thing, hoping is spelt with one "p"
i had a strange image of you hopping around dreaming of Cory...haha
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Kips (Big Shot/ admin)
Number of posts : 146
Age : 31
Location : England
Age : Thirteen
Writing forte/s : Weird poetry and awful stories!
Registration date : 2006-08-11
| | Subject: Re: Dreams Thu Aug 17, 2006 3:17 pm | |
| I think she does hop about when she thinks about Cory... she sounds like she is when she talks bout him... | |
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AngelWithTheScabbedWings
Mod in top hat
Number of posts : 218
Age : 31
Location : Powell River B.C, Canada
Age : 14
Writing forte/s : Horror and Poems
Registration date : 2006-08-11
| | Subject: Re: Dreams Thu Aug 17, 2006 3:37 pm | |
| What does that mean?  | |
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