Number of posts : 7 Age : 26 Age : Nine Writing forte/s : Poetry Registration date : 2006-08-13
Subject: Ice haert Mon Aug 14, 2006 4:43 am
The blossom falls from the trees And scatters on the ground.
I file like I have an Ice heart, And it is slowly melting like life around me.
I am distort and desperate, I cry every day and I will for the rest of my life.
By Emily
Aged nine years.
AngelWithTheScabbedWings Mod in top hat
Number of posts : 218 Age : 31 Location : Powell River B.C, Canada Age : 14 Writing forte/s : Horror and Poems Registration date : 2006-08-11
Subject: Re: Ice haert Mon Aug 14, 2006 10:04 am
WEll, The spaces are not needed nor are the . caus eit makes the flow go off but other then that I loved it
Admin Kips (Big Shot/ admin)
Number of posts : 146 Age : 31 Location : England Age : Thirteen Writing forte/s : Weird poetry and awful stories! Registration date : 2006-08-11
Subject: Re: Ice haert Mon Aug 14, 2006 12:37 pm
The blossom falls from the trees And scatters on the ground. I feellike I have an ice heart, And it is slowly melting like ? life around me. I am distraught and desperate, I cry every day and I will for the rest of my life.
PLEASE LET ME CHECK YOUR SPELLINGS COOKIE, PLEASE!!!!
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