Run away

The tears are like acid stinging your eyes
The hate for yourself runs through your soul
You’ve had to much
You can’t take it
Your mind is screaming run away
Your love is telling you go
No one wants you
Just run away from home
Run away from yourself
Run away from the old you

Ya.. I was crying makeing this poem that is where I got the acid tears cause it hurt like a bitch.

powerful poem
strange rhythm but it works well

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omg, that was good ... yeah ... i liked the rythmn ... this is just amazing ... as always ur poems rocks!

I prefured it at the start, I really like the line about acid tears. The last two lines seemed a bit odd but altogether well done! I could feel a lot of emotion in it. :-)

That was graet i wish i could write like that i a do a few but they're not as good as that.[/b]

Thanks I added a last line so it makes more sence