Since TW is down [but It'll work again it has to or else I'll kill someone
] But I thought I should post it here. I have no clue what this poem is about but i like it....sorta. I wasn't sure if I sould capitalize god or not, i'm not hugly religious or anything so...
I don't know you,
And you've never emt me.
We weill go our separate ways
As God cammands.
I was sitting idly in my place
Examining the thin delacte trees
As I let my body obsorb the sun
But behind every breath I drew,
A sort of emtiness was there,
That I could not explain.
you don't know me,
And I've never met you
We will meet one day
As god commands
And as I was observing the trees,
A distrubance broke my train of though
The leaves crushed and I saw
I was complete, full
You've made me this way.
Now I've met you
And you're here with me
Two lost souls, together
As god cammands
WOW! Thats so different then what it originally was. It's stupid but bring on the cold hard critisim baby WOOO
P.S. Don't mind the spelling mistakes
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